Thursday, 6 August 2020

Persuasive writing... again!

W.A.L.T. Write a persuasive text. Here is a persuasive writing thing again! go to the farthest reaches of the blog to see it! here is #2.

Not All People Should Have Pets

It is outrageous and unsafe that all people should have a pet. They can get you
sick, cost truckloads of money and waste space for something you use more. 


Firstly, a pet sometimes has a virus that could get you so sick you could go to
the hospital. I am mainly talking about allergies and bacteria. People can die
from sicknesses you know.


Secondly, they are expensive. Pets can cost $100 dollars or more for food and
dog attacks. Also for the dog itself. Once our dog attacked someone and we lost
$200 dollars because of our dog so we had to give it away… sad right?


Finally, what if someone doesn’t have time for a pet? What if they want to buy
something they will use more in their lives? Like a 50-inch big screen tv? Like
seriously????

In conclusion it is obvious that not all people should have pets. As I said earlier,
they get you sick, cost money and take space for something you will use more.
Thank you for listening to this argument!

1 comment:

  1. Well done Fox. This is a really strong argument. You have included some very valid points for why all children should not have a pet. I particularly like the gripping words in your introduction 'outrageous' and 'unsafe'.

    Miss Pownall.

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