Monday 23 August 2021

Narritive

 W.A.L.T. Create a detailed and descriptive Narrative.

I made a Narrative about Minecraft because I love Minecraft. :)

The Invasion

Fox and his friends were investigating the ruins on top of the hill. “We goin’ in?” Fox asked. Zeb, Alex

and Kalem all nodded. As they were checking it out Zeb found a Portal. “Hey guys, I found

this bedrock portal!” Zeb Called. As the rest of the group came to the portal, they heard a

humming noise. “Let's go in.” Alex said. Then they got sucked into the portal. They woke

up in the most blocky dimension in the world. “Um, are we in Minecraft?” Kalem asked.

Then they heard a rumbling noise, the loudest noise in Minecraft. They saw about 10,000

things charging at them on the horizon. 


“ We need to go now, punch a tree, make some basic tools and a boat, we need

to go now!” Fox Exclaimed. They made the boats and tools, so they started running.

They found an ocean and they placed the boats and started rowing away from the

things that were chasing them. As they rowed, Alex thought about what would happen to

them. “I see land!” Alex shouted to his friends. As they rowed towards the land, they saw

a cave and decided to mine for some stone and iron. After they made iron chest plates

and stone tools for everybody, when they exited the cave they realised it was nighttime.


They saw a skeleton aiming an arrow at them and Kalem blocked the arrow. Then Zeb and

Fox slaughtered the skeleton and found a bow. “I’ll take the bow.” Fox said. “Okay.” Alex

sighed. They killed some more mobs and Alex got a bow. They then found a punch 2 and

infinity 1 bow. Fox took that bow and gave the old bow to Zeb. They found a village and

there were 2 blacksmiths. The group found some diamonds and iron tools in the chests.

Fox found this red button and fell down a hole and into this room with maxed out things

of everything. He took the stuff and distributed it to the whole group evenly. They were

OP and ready for battle. They made a base and built a castle where they were ready for

the last stand against the things that have chased them for so long.


They got on the castle wall and saw the things. They realised it was this glitch which

was as dark as midnight. They each had 100 health and did 10 damage per hit. They

killed one in 10 seconds. “We need an army for this, we’re going to fail.” Alex sighed in

defeat. Then a voice behind them said “Well you're lucky you’ve got an army of your

own.” They whipped around and saw these people behind them. “What the heck is

going on?” Kalem asked. “You need help right?” one asked. “Yes, yes, yes and yes.”

Zeb said. “Okay, everybody let’s do this!” the other one yelled. “Let the battle begin.” Fox said


The quartet charged into battle and quickly found their target which was the boss guy. It had

1000 health and it did 30 damage per hit. “Come and get me losers!” The boss guy taunted.

“Come and get us!” Alex yelled back. The guy charged across the battlefield, knocking his own

soldiers out of the way to get to the group of 4. He swung his battleaxe toward them when he

got there. They all swiftly dogged out of the way and counter attacked the boss guy. It was

now at 975 health. It swung the battle axe at Zeb while he was recovering. Fox barely managed

to block the attack on Zeb and Zeb hit it with everyone else. It was at 950 health now. As the

battle raged around them, they found themselves surrounded by the enemy. The boss said,

“Ready… Aim… Fire!” Then there was this thing that came down from the sky. They realised

it was a laser cannon. Alex shot the cannon and got the boss on 200 health along with killing

some of the glitches. But then the cannon broke. The battle continued hastily. Soon the boss

was on 50 health and Fox, Kalem, Alex and Zeb were on half a heart. They all attacked and it

was on 5 health. The thing did it’s final attack which was spinning the axe around and throwing it.

Fox dodged the attack and delivered the final blow. It was over. They finally defeated

the glitch and began to celebrate their victory. The friends healed up and decided it was

time to go back to their world. They filled the path of destruction caused by the glitches.

They made it back to the portal and managed to get back through the portal. The four

friends got back to their houses and decided to make a new world. The group never

went through the portal again… Or did they?


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